Hey Daniel, I could definitely tell the improvement between your 1st and 2nd elevator pitch as it appears more memorized and smooth. Your delivery is much more confident and impactful. An area of improvement that I noticed would be to incorporate some excitement and pull some extra passion into your pitch. I know it can be difficult while speaking into a camera, but getting excited about your service is important especially with a cool business opportunity like yours. Overall, nice job!
Great job with your elevator pitch. You did a good job at not speed through your pitch like most people do, including myself. You provided great detail regarding the service you are offering. I would suggest in the future to work on movement/your hands. There were a few movements that you did that appear to be a nervous habit which is totally understandable and it it something I also do. Otherwise, excellent job.
Hey Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI could definitely tell the improvement between your 1st and 2nd elevator pitch as it appears more memorized and smooth. Your delivery is much more confident and impactful. An area of improvement that I noticed would be to incorporate some excitement and pull some extra passion into your pitch. I know it can be difficult while speaking into a camera, but getting excited about your service is important especially with a cool business opportunity like yours. Overall, nice job!
Daniel,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch. You did a good job at not speed through your pitch like most people do, including myself. You provided great detail regarding the service you are offering. I would suggest in the future to work on movement/your hands. There were a few movements that you did that appear to be a nervous habit which is totally understandable and it it something I also do. Otherwise, excellent job.